Yup, that image describes me to a T right now. Well, not really because my hair is in a bun but you know what I mean.
I’m currently fighting against the sin of passive voice. Some instances escaped the last few edits and so here I am trying to eliminate them one by one.
Passive voice occurs in writing when the subject of the sentence is acted on by the verb. It’s the opposite of active voice where the subject of the sentence performs the action or the verb. Continue reading “Struggling with the sin of Passive Voice”
I’m still tinkering with the blurb for The Pursual. Here’s what I have so far. Continue reading “Blurb Work Redux: The Pursual”
Mailing lists are extremely important for authors be they traditional or self published. Being able to directly contact a reader allows for affordable and effective marketing, which is essential for small business owners like self published authors.
As wonderful as a mailing list can be, it can also become a problem for not just the sender (in this case, the author) but also, the recipient.
And that’s the point of this here post.
Continue reading “#writingbiz: Mailing Lists – Don’t Overdo It”
Writing the blurb for The Pursual has been the hardest thing ever. As in…the extra hardest.
I honestly didn’t think it would prove as difficult, even though I’ve read that it’s hard work.
(Yeah, I can be as delusional as the next person *Kanye shrug*) Continue reading “Blurb Work: The Pursual”
When you look at a lot of blurbs, you usually see a bolded or italicized first sentence that goes something like this:
Winning what you want may cost you everything you love
- Winner’s Curse, Marie Rutkowski
She is the greatest assassin her world has ever known.
But does she have the heart of a killer?
- Crown of Midnight, Sarah J. Maas
Such sentences are the hook. Continue reading “What’s Your Story’s Hook?”
As I noted in a previous post, I’m doing less writing and more reading nowadays.
I’ve got to say, I love it! It took a while for me to accept that this was to be a period of learning and not one of creation. Still, I’m enjoying the focus on craft and have pinned several relevant writing tips at my Writing Tips board on Pinterest as well as shared several links to important writing advice on Twitter.
In my quest to become a better writer, I downloaded Emotion Amplifiers from Amazon when it was available for free. Written by Angela Ackerman and Becca Puglisi, the book provides writers with tips on how to strengthen the emotional tone of a scene. The authors highlight that doing so can enhance a reader’s emotional investment in the story and it’s characters, as well as assist with the pace of the story.
As a writer whose editor kindly noted a need for such in my WIP, I definitely found Emotion Amplifiers to be useful and recommend it to any writers who need it.One of my goals as a writer is to keep my readers engaged from beginning to end. I want 1o eliminate any skipped pages or paragraphs and encourage my readers to love (or hate) my characters enough to want to see what happens to them. I think this book will help me achieve my objective.
If you don’t have the Emotion Amplifiers book, get your copy at the following online outlets
Barnes & Noble
As of 10/12/16, the ebook is free on Amazon!
What books have you read recently that you find useful, be it for writing or something else? Do share! I’m currently reading Leviathan Wakes by James S.A. Corey (pen name for 2 dope science fiction creators) and will soon read Let’s Get Digital by David Gaughran to learn more about the self-publishing business.
I finally watched Star Trek Beyond and loved it!
What a great movie. Right amount of laughs, tension, action and heart-racing fear to keep me engaged. Even the bad guy made sense in the end.
So, what did I learn from the movie?
Plenty. Continue reading “#writinglessons: Star Trek Beyond”
I confess – I watch entirely too much tv. Yes, fine, I’ve said it. *covers face in shame*
To justify the amount of tv I consume, I try my best to learn what I can from shows and figure out how those lessons can be applied to my writing in a positive way.
Does that make any sense? Or am I just trying to make excuses to watch more tv?
Uh … yeah.
So, I watched the first episode (pilot) of Aftermath from Syfy and it left me … wondering.
Continue reading “#writinglessons: Aftermath Season 1 Episode 1”
My current work in progress, The Pursual, is the first story I plan to publish as a novel. As such, I think developmental editing will be essential to creating the best possible product.
But now, a problem presents itself. One I hope is not unique to me.
How do I pick the right editor for me?
Continue reading “Picking an editor for my WIP”
I recently read an article which reviewed a talk George R.R. Martin , author of the Game of Thrones books, gave in Australia.
As a fan of the television series and a writer aspiring to create worlds that readers can get lost in, it’s no surprise that I paid close attention to what he had to say.
Here are a few of the tips I took away from the article:
- don’t let characters wallow in despair for too long;
- avoid cliches;
- show violence truthfully but also show its after-effects; and
- use grey characters (i.e. not all good, not all bad).
He had a lot more to say but those four tips spoke loudly to me.
(I’m sorry that I don’t have a link to the original article. Please don’t shoot me.)
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